Obeyed, yet neither loved nor feared,
This man.
Skin prickles with unease to have him near.
I had to get him off my trail.
Ask why
He wields a power I can’t stall. Derail.
Trapped in a place where his will
Rules all,
Scour my brain for a solution. Nil.
Ideas disembowelled. Slight.
Occlude.
In solipsistic whispers hide the light.
*
http://dailypost.wordpress.com/2013/12/30/daily-prompt-brainwave/
vic briggs 
Love this. Also, it uses one of my favorite words (solipsistic).
It’s a beautiful word, isn’t it?
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Ah-maaaaazing !! Loving your analogies and these beautiful lines.
Thank you, Lala. Your comments always make me smile. Hope you’re having a great start to the last day of the year 🙂
So glad to know that I could make you smile. though I can’t make myself smile ever 😉 Hope you are having a fun filled day too 🙂
It’s been very busy – taking it easy today 🙂
Good 😉
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