I think… I love you too.
Such simple words, but listen
What do they tell you now
Under the glaring sun?
Ambiguous at best,
At worst more than reluctant
To turn the passion’s thrust
Into a lover’s promise.
And what is love?
A doll that toys with your emotions,
Dressed up in idle flutter,
Misnomers… earthly pleas.
A youthful dream perhaps
Made true by foolish summers
Spent nosing through the dust
Of erstwhile myths.
Await your Romeo’s boots
To clamber through the window,
Or Cleopatra’s knife to carve desires new.
Fools! Their blood crushed worlds
And you want to drink oceans
When their depths in anguish
Will drown in vows untrue
The last beat of your heart.
Unshackled, stand alone
And learn the price of daring
To hope against all proof.
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It felt that way as I was writing it. Thank you.
Think I’m in love with this one~ really love it.
Thank you. It is one for contradictions, is it not? 🙂
Indeed it is~
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A beautifully written poem – I love the references you have made to ‘romantic’ characters. And what meaning do those three little words really convey? Can we ever understand how they are perceived by others?
Thank you, Chris. What meaning indeed. Fascinating – what stories most recall when speaking of love. All tragic, all ending in death. Famous couples, all punished for their passion. I cannot claim to know why I interpreted the theme this way and not another. Sometimes my fingertips pour words with little assistance from my conscious self.
Very nice, Vic. Well done.
Thank you, navigator. I am yet to take the straightforward route when it comes to daily prompts. Oh well. I hope it makes for some good contrast at least.
Indeed it does.
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